Pitch Review

Group 1
We thought that it was a well thought out presentation. Very thoroughly explained, however we were unsure of the actual story. We got a basic idea of 3 main locations being used, however without a step outline we didn't understand how this could last the duration of the song. The weather could also be an issue.

Group 2
We think you have a great idea with the music video however we think that the weather may let you down and we are quite confused with the narrative. We understand there are three locations but not sure what the actors will be doing in them.

Group 3
The weather may let you down as it may rain and snow and therefore you cannot re-shoot. The story is good overall but slightly confusing on how the actors will fit in it.

Group 4
I think that this group is very well prepared. They will do very well if if the preparation and filming is done properly.

Group 5
We think that the group has planned everything out in such detail that they are clearly ready to start filming.

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In response to these statements, we believe that the comments about weather can be an issue with any outdoor-shooting music video, so the best way to overcome this is to check the weather beforehand, so we can plan filming days with certain weather we need. Also, as we're filming early, if there is bad weather we have a lot of time to re-shoot. However, with the storyline, there may have been slight confusions because we didn't go into extreme detail with how everything with play out however we described it enough to tell the basic storylines, how the locations fit in as well as the actors. The best thing to do is for the groups to see our step-outline in order to see the general concept and how the story will fit into each section of the song.
Overall, we are fairly happy with how the pitch went and generally everyone thought our idea was good and was well planned out.